Evaluation

Media evaluation

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Feedback on final products

• I like how the colour scheme matches, and how the pink links into the lip colour.
• I like the use of the quote.
• The image is good; her eyes draw you in.
• Its not too busy or too plain, there's enough information to make me want to buy it.
• The masthead font matches to theme well.
• The images draws you in.
• The colour scheme goes well with the image.
• I really like the masthead.

• I think the editors notes is a good personal touch.
• I like how certain text is highlighted with boldness and colour.
• I like the images used.
• I like how the front cover is used on the contents page.
• I like how the title is the same font as the masthead.
• I like how the sidebar highlights the key advertisment of the magazine.

• I think that the banner of pictures at the bottom of the double page spread is highly effective and fun.
• I like the different font on the 'Hottest, newest, freshest' text.
• I love the housestyle; the pink on the grey. 
• I like the initial letter because it highlights the text.
• I think that the page split is shown well though the title.
• I like how the image dominates the page.



Final Products

These are my final products, after getting feedback I found that the backgrounds were to bland and a stock colour so I changed it to a gradient so it was more appealing to the eye. I also made the font smaller on the double page spread and added far more text to make it look more authentic. Also to make it more authentic I added more images to the contents page and added page numbers to both the contents and the double page spread. 

NEW double page spread.

This is my new double page, from the last draft, I changed the overall colour scheme to black as I thought it made more of an impact to the page, I also put the writing in columns to make it look more conventional.

New contents page

Before completing my evaluation, I had feedback for my products and from this I've improved my products; I have added more features to the magazine also made the page look more full. 

Evaluation

Today I begun to write up the evaluation for my contents, front cover and double page spread, this involves numerous question evaluating aspect of the three projects as well as discussing techniques I've used and how I've improved since the preliminary task.

Double Page Spread Draft 3

This is my third draft of my double page spread, from the second draft I outlined the pug in the top corner so it stood out more, and removed the background from the 'Hayley Pyatt' text as I thought it look too much. I also noticed an error in 'What not to do in 2010...' should have been 'What not to do in 2011...' so I changed this. However I still don't think my double page spread looks professional and to a high quality, I will next evaluate it and then make more possible changes to improve on it.