This is my third draft of my double page spread, from the second draft I outlined the pug in the top corner so it stood out more, and removed the background from the 'Hayley Pyatt' text as I thought it look too much. I also noticed an error in 'What not to do in 2010...' should have been 'What not to do in 2011...' so I changed this. However I still don't think my double page spread looks professional and to a high quality, I will next evaluate it and then make more possible changes to improve on it.
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